Peer Review
Your essay does a great job of stating the textual evidence and creating an intriguing argument for why the arts and sciences should be combined. Your quotes are the perfect possible quotes to help support your thesis and really add to the overall strength of your paper. One thing your essay could really benefit from would be introducing pharmacy into your essay much sooner. You do a great job talking about art and science in general but creating a more personalized and focused paper, you would be able to go more in-depth on what you really want to say. All of your evidence and analyses are really strong and informative. Elaborating on what you already have down on paper would really enhance your paper.
You have a very strong writing style and are off to a great start.
You make some wonderful and specific suggestions for your peer. Well done!